one of your animations. Yes my speakers are working. Good animation but i thought the song was a bit lazy. :(. Merry Cristmas :D.

...But definatly worth the wait.

It's good to see that you had good plot and character development in this one, (Something i thought was lacking in enemy in the snow for instance)

Again as i have said before in my reviews with you i have to tell you what's bad with the animation, otherwise what would be the point of even making a comment.

Firstly good news (Start with good; it is Cristmas after all). I think you addressed the problems you had with enemy in the snow with this animation, i am referring to plot and character development, (don't get me wrong enemy in the snow was a good animation, but the lack of development spoiled it for me a little). The art work is fantastic as always with your work. Voice acting was also very well co-ordinated.

Bad points. Well i'll admit you didn't exactly make it easy for me to find anything majorly wrong or really any minor faults with this piece, some times the lip sync was off a little bit and i thought the inventors toys were a little too 'abstract' for my liking. (that was a joke for the slower readers). creepy little things. ¬_¬

Also i'd like to ask, you referre to God in your work frequently and was wondering if God influences your work in anyway? You are proof not all religous people are boring. (Not that i'm saying Wayne is boring... well maby a little....Sorry Wayne).

....but im going to give you some different advice, i think you should try and ovoid making it like a 'Egoraptor Flash' i recon there's too many of them popping up now. But good work on this and i look forward to seeing the longer version.

this did make me smile.

but this is really really really good.